IELTS Writing Task 1 Introduction & Paraphrasing: วิธีเขียน Intro ให้เร็วและชัด

หนึ่งในทักษะสำคัญของการทำ Writing Band 7+ คือความสามารถในการ Paraphrase ซึ่งก็คือการใช้คำศัพท์ใหม่หรือรูปประโยคใหม่เพื่อสื่อสารข้อความเดิม โดยเน้น “ความถูกต้องและความรวดเร็ว” มากกว่าการทำประโยคให้ซับซ้อน

ตัวอย่าง Paraphrase แบบคำต่อคำ

Original: The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Original	Paraphrase จากบทเรียนเดิม
shows	demonstrates
the proportion of the population	the percentage of people
aged 65 and over	aged 65 or higher
between 1940 and 2040	over a period of 100 years from 1640 to 2040
in three different countries	in various countries

Synonyms ที่ใช้บ่อย

คำ/วลีเดิม	ตัวอย่างที่ใช้แทน
shows	demonstrates / reveals / compares (เมื่อโจทย์เป็นการเปรียบเทียบ)
the number of	the figure for
the percentage of	the proportion of
men and women	males and females
many kinds of	various kinds of

Cambridge 7 Test 1 — Intro

โจทย์: The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Paraphrased: The table compares the proportions of consumer expenses for three groups of goods and services in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.

Cambridge 13 Test 3 — Intro

โจทย์: The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Paraphrased: The bar chart compares the amount of electricity produced and consumed in ten different countries in 2014.

Cambridge 12 — Intro

Original	Paraphrased version
The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.	The bar chart compares the proportion of Australian males and females in six age groups who are physically active in 2010.
The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.	The maps below compare the current image of Islip town centre and its intended changes.
The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.	The bar chart below illustrates how many times US citizens go to fast food restaurants over a 10-year period from 2003 to 2013.
The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.	The diagram illustrates how electricity is generated from geothermal power plant.

ตัวอย่างเพิ่มเติม

Original	Paraphrased version
The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.	The bar chart compares the proportion of families who live in their own house and in rented houses in two different countries from 1918 to 2011.
The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.	The two maps compare access routes to a city hospital in two different years.
The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.	The pie charts compare the quantity of electricity generated using various sources of fuel in separate countries in two different years.